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Describe the sound of the wings (a soft rustle) or the smell of the air (maybe rain or ozone from the flight) to make the scene more immersive.

August 30, 2022, fell on a Tuesday. For most of the world, it was unremarkable. But for Tiny Sis, it marked an emotional earthquake. Perhaps it was the day “Demi Hawks” left—moved away, ended a friendship, deleted his account, or something far worse. tinysis220830demihawksmissedhimtoomuch better